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Bonnie Bishop's avatar

TAXIDEA TAXUS

Medicine Woman

She showed me

how to dig

and where—

Into the closet

and through

the past

through objects

owned by others

through photographs

of ancestors

known and unknown

through

mind-memories

and body-memories

down and down

deeper still

until I find

the root

of the wounding

take it

like medicine

and am healed

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

"The great matriarch and her stories had been buried these last twenty years, in the side chamber where she died. Such is the badger’s way." I love that they do, these little miracles of hidden intelligence in the creatures of secret places, you speak their language so fluently David.

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David Knowles's avatar

Hi Susie. Thanks for coming along. I don't know how you find the time. I barely surface for a breather from seventeenth-century Gaelic subjunctives at the moment. Another few months of scribbling on this modern parchment and I'll hopefully be done with the rite of passage that is a PhD - to sail a bit battered back into the world :-)

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

I applaud your greater ability David, Gaelic is a complicated language, seventeenth century Gaelic I daren't even hazard I guess, I have difficulty enough juggling French conjugation, never mind the subjunctives and conjunctions! As for time, bare minutes are snatched at breakfast with hot tea is all... Four hours a day extra would be a welcome gift!

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Caroline Mellor's avatar

Reads like one extraordinary prose poem

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David Knowles's avatar

That's kind of you, Caroline. It was always the plan :-) I've been doing a lot of translation for bilingual publication lately, of modern Gaelic poetry. Trying to let some of the magic rub off into my prose :-)

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Caroline Mellor's avatar

It most certainly does! :-)

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Patricia Keene's avatar

It seems each new piece, David, is more captivating than the last. You are a well of word smithing and weaving a story so descriptive, the reader (listener), is caught up in the scene itself! Bravo!

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David Knowles's avatar

Dear Patricia, always there with a generous word as I try to walk my way across the wobbly tightrope of language :-)

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Carmine Hazelwood's avatar

We all could wish to be carried with such love during our funeral processions, as was the little mole. Yes to the generosity of the land, and memory, too. Death (and its reminders) in spring always feels the most poignant to me, the sharp contrast between burgeoning life and its endings — but of course that is my human illusion, they circle each other endlessly, with no resting place. Wishing you long rains to awaken the bone lands, David. x

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David Knowles's avatar

Hi, Carmine. 'Death in spring', yes, you put your finger on the pulse again. That's why I always cry when I hear the story of The Brindled Cow :-)

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Ambermoggie's avatar

As always I’m struck by the beauty and poetry of your words. Thank you

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David Knowles's avatar

Dear Ambermoggie, there you are again, with your basket of kind words, always conjuring up the image of a wonderful marmalade cat :-) Thank you for both

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Jean McKinney's avatar

Good lord this is beautiful. You blend poetry and prose to create amazing word pictures.

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David Knowles's avatar

Thanks, Jean, for your kindness again. I've spent a lot of time translating Gaelic poetry recently, for bilingual publication. I try my best to let some of the magic dust rub off :-)

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Jean McKinney's avatar

Translating Gaelic poetry?? How cool is that? Once, a long time ago, I tried to learn Irish Gaelic. Didn't pursue it but those languages are so beautiful.

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David Knowles's avatar

Yes, its a fearful difficult language to get anywhere near right. I spent ten years living and breathing it out on the far western fringes where it is still spoken as the everyday language of hopes and dreams and going to the shops. And really, I'm still just in the foothills :-)

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Jean McKinney's avatar

I salute you, sir. Where are these poems appearing?

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David Knowles's avatar

There are odd poems in journals here and there but the recent work was translating the whole of Agallamh sa Cheo by Ceaití Ní Bheildiúin, which won the Hartnett prize a couple of years ago. That is being published bilingually under the title Climbing the Sky, by the Irish-language publisher Cló Iar-Chonnacht, probably coming out this autumn. I had a lot of fun working with her, we both lean a bit to magical realism :-)

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Jean McKinney's avatar

That must have been a wonderful thing to do. I'd love to have a look at it.

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Emily Charlotte Powell's avatar

Goodness. I am constantly astounded by the utter beauty of your word-witchery, David. The spells you cast with language leave me stunned speechless. I look at my paddle hands and mourn those soil swimmers sinking upwards to drown under the pitiless sky but knowing one day it will be my turn to be washed clean by the land to return my stories…

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Lor's avatar
Apr 24Edited

David, you have left me speechless, and as you know, that is a major feat. We drove up to our seasonal camp today . Just south of the Canadian border at the northern tip of Vermont. Still too cold to begin the season, but a beautiful day to start the process of waking up the land with strong arms and a rake. I sat on a large granite boulder overlooking the lake at lunch time , listening to your voice carry me across the pristine glacial water, across an ocean, to your home in Cumbria. I listened twice. My heart filled with your lyrical meditation mixing with an abundance of our water and the rebirth of spring. Thankful for your words. Ironically ,my rake found its own hidden bone, a perfect spinal vertebrae. I guess I did have a few words to say…

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David Knowles's avatar

Dear Lor. You take me and my bag of words on trips to such wonderful places. Ever grateful :-)

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Lor's avatar

I’m so glad I can reciprocate, even just a little bit !

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David E. Perry's avatar

You are the archer who, with those words you cup and flex, and peer along, craft arrows, straight shafted and precision-fletched which you then send flying toward their marks, these stories and tomes. We are not your target, we understand that, the stories themselves are your aim. But setting ourselves along your arrows' paths we feel the sizz and twirl of breeze as they pass, see the parting of air, and gasp our wondrous gasps as your arrows find their center. What magic, what honor to stand behind that story, to see and feel the approaching arrows of your poet aim, to feel the faint jolt as tip meets target center, completing a tale and piercing us, deeply, who stand just behind.

Ever grateful, my friend. Again, your arrow flies true...

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David Knowles's avatar

Dear friend. I had no intention to intrude on your grief and it is for sure that I of all people have precious little wisdom to offer. But I was thinking of you when I wrote the last paragraph. Keep singing your lovely songs :-)

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Harriet Grae's avatar

I loved listening to this, David. I listened a couple of times. Your voice matches the feeling of the text so well. It soothed me, today. Thank you.

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David Knowles's avatar

Thank you, Harriet. So nice to know my words found a home :-)

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Buckwheat Blues's avatar

How very beautiful!

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David Knowles's avatar

Thank you. That is kind of you.

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Kimberly Warner's avatar

Astonishing meditation David. You walked me into the slow, parched vacancy of rainless scapes, feeling how that true blue sky can also be truly cruel. But then! You bring me into the soil, also dusty but decaying, replenishing, even by your own generous hands carrying the weight across tarmac, reminding me that even in all this death and dying, the land gives us back to wholeness, light, fresh, almost springlike in your cotton-grass breeze.

“Today, again, her messenger crawls lanky-legged back to moisture and reports that the blue remains miserly, hoarding its wealth offshore. The dew’s lips are parched and cracked. She can barely lick them wet.”

Brav-freaking-O! Wow wow wow.

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David Knowles's avatar

Ah, Kimberly, where would I be without your encouragement, as I teeter and topple over the stepping stones of narrative while the torrent of language rushes by. Hope your book is flying off the shelves and leaping out of the servers :-) I bet it is.

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Mary Booker's avatar

I do love the way you write, David.

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David Knowles's avatar

That is kind, Mary. Thanks for coming back.

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Theresa Lister's avatar

Another amazing and beautifully-crafted piece - and so many beautiful comments that I can't add to them, only agree with them. But the little mole flipper brought tears to my eyes.

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David Knowles's avatar

You are so kind, Theresa. He was a fine creature and worthy of our tears for sure.

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